DQ COMIC: Page 10

I've read all your pages, (up until this point) so this critique will focus on the DQ Comic overall.

First off, it's neat, easy to tell what's happening. Every panel has its place and the reading flows easily from one page to the next. Truly commendable since so many comics turn into a jumble of random panels and ideas. The dialogue is also well placed, there isn't to much or to little. You have a talent for getting the point across in enough words to make sense but not so many as to lose your readers interest. Your characters are drawn in a consistent and rather professional style. Great job!

I always try to tell how I think an artist can improve in a critique, but there is really nothing I see that's wrong with Darkstar's quest. In all honesty that really surprises me. You have done excellent work with this, turning what most would say is an overused trope in to a fun, fast paced comic I'd love to read into the wee hours of the morning. Any complaints I would have would just be nit-picking.

I really am enjoying this. Keep up the good work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>!!!!!!